blackplace

In response to:Diary 22

Fri, 09 Nov 2007 07:13:01 +0100

I am going to camp with my classmates after school.
There /i/s/ about 59 student____ who will go to the campsite.
I think it will be very funny.
I didn't know what will happen tomorrow, but i want it will be happy.
I will stop writing diary for two days beacuse of the camp.

Correct the mistakes in the above before enjoying your camping activities. [There-is Clause!]

In response to:Diary14

Tue, 30 Oct 2007 20:59:55 +0100

what is deating?

In response to:Diary 1

Mon, 15 Oct 2007 15:43:50 +0200

Yes,you talked very well.
I don't want to write the diary.
It is very boring.

In response to:Diary 1

Mon, 15 Oct 2007 13:23:37 +0200

HAPPY DIARY WRITING PAL

In response to:Self-presentation

Thu, 04 Oct 2007 15:58:26 +0200

Thx 4 that, tht's v helpful

CHERIFI

In response to:Self-presentation

Thu, 04 Oct 2007 15:56:53 +0200

It would help, if you are teaching English to teach it correctly. For example, "There are five activities to improving English" DOES NOT MAKE SENSE. That is unless you are arrogantly trying to improve the entire English language. "There are five way to improve YOUR English" does make sense.

I could go on pointing mistakes in every single sentence in your post, including elementray spelling mistakes.

The last sentance is particularly awful: "So their english will be more better". NOTHING in English is ever MORE better...

So Students. Do not use this website, because the teachers do not have a good grasp of the English language.